Question

czy to jest dobrze napisane?

Hi! My name is Oliwia and I am 13 years old. I love Eminem so my favorite song, movie is 8 mile or lose yourself, whatever, becouse it is about his life. I like play basketball. In school I like learn English 'couse I wanna go to the USA and live there. I would be rich becouse;

first- I like money

second- I like to help people and then I could help people in need.

My friend name is Ola. She is the best. Together we always do something cool and never get bored.

niektóre rzeczy sobie przetłumaczyłam w tłumaczu, więc napewno nie są dobrze napisane. XDD jeśli są jakieś błędy - proszę o poprawienie.

a i jeszcze napiszcie mi jak to się czyta. ; )

z góry dzięki.

Answer 1

Drobne poprawki wprowadzę:

 

Hi! My name is Oliwia and I am 13 years old. I love Eminem so my favorite song movie is 8 mile or lose yourself, because it is about his life. I like playing basketball. In school I like learning English because I wanna go to the USA and live there. I would be rich because;

first- I like money

second- I like helping people and then I could help people when their need it

My friend's name is Ola. She is the best. Together we always do something cool and never get bored.

 

Naprawde nie umiesz przeczytać? Bo takie pisanie jak to się czyta jest trudne. Jak coś to napisz jakich słówek nie umiesz przeczytać.