Czy to jest dobrze napisane ? :)
Hi Kate !
How are you ? I hope you ‘re fine. Greetings from Oława ! I ‘m sitting on the grass and I eating juicy strawberries at the moment. I’m spending my holidays with my aunt here, because there are great views, beautiful countryside and every day is many things to do. I’m going to stay here for two weeks. The weather is brilliant ! It’s warm and sunny and it’s 25 degrees. I having a great time here. Birds are singing, but I don’t enjoy, because there aren’t many shops, so I can’t buy souvenirs. I met daughter my aunt’s neighbours yesterday. Her name is Anna. She is really nice. Tommorow we’re going to the picnic. Then we will feed farm animals like cows,hens or goats.
How about your holidays ? I wish you were here. Say hi to your family!
See you soon !
XYZ
Hi Kate !
How are you ? I hope you ‘re fine. Greetings from Oława ! I ‘m sitting on the grass and I eating juicy strawberries at the moment. I’m spending my holidays with my aunt here, because there are great views, beautiful countryside and every day is many things to do. I’m going to stay here for two weeks. The weather is brilliant ! It’s warm and sunny and it’s 25 degrees. I having a great time here. Birds are singing, but I don’t enjoy, because there aren’t many shops, so I can’t buy souvenirs. I met daughter my aunt’s neighbours yesterday. Her name is Anna. She is really nice. Tommorow we’re going to the picnic. Then we will feed farm animals like cows,hens or goats.
How about your holidays ? I wish you were here. Say hi to your family!
See you soon !
XYZ
Odpowiedź:
Hi Kate !
How are you? I hope you‘re fine. Greetings from Oława! I‘m sitting on the grass and I'm [jeśli używasz czasu countinuous, pamiętaj o dodawaniu czasownika "be" w odpowiedniej formie zaraz po podmiocie] eating juicy strawberries at the moment. I’m spending my holidays with my aunt, because there are great views, beautiful countryside and every day there's many things to do. I’m going to stay here for two weeks. The weather is brilliant. It’s warm and sunny [jeśli piszesz, że jest ciepło, nie ma potrzeby podania temperatury :)]. I'm having a great time here. Birds are singing, but sadly [to co było tu wcześniej strasznie gryzło się z sensem tekstu], there aren’t many shops, so I can’t buy souvenirs. I met my aunt's neighbours' daughter yesterday. Her name is Anna. She is really nice. We’re going to the picnic tomorrow [określenia czasu na koniec zdania]. Then we are going [jak już piszesz countinuousem to nie zmieniaj tego] to feed farm animals like cows, hens or goats.
How about your holidays? I wish you were here. Say hi to your family!
See you soon !
XYZ
Wyjaśnienie:
Ogółem bardzo ładna praca :) Jeśli masz jakieś wątpliwości, pisz w komentarzach, liczę na naj :)