Czy to jest dobrze napisane?
Dear Schoolmates ,
Our class decided to organise a workshop of healthy nutrition . If you like to have a brainstorming ,you should join us ! We will analyse which food is healthy for us ,and which not. The purpose of this workshop is to get know more about food which we are eating ,to know what we shouldn't eat and what we should eat more often .
The workshop will be on every Friday at 4 p.m. .At first we will watch intresting movie about making fastfood ,then we will analyse what we would make people healthier and what for a dishes are reasons of many deaths and disorders.
If you want to know more about food which you are eating ,and if you wanna save your life ,please come to class 89 at school on monday . Everybody are welcome.
xyz
Dear Schoolmates ,
Our class decided to organise a workshop of healthy nutrition . If you like to have a brainstorming ,you should join us ! We will analyse which food is healthy for us ,and which not. The purpose of this workshop is to get know more about food which we are eating ,to know what we shouldn't eat and what we should eat more often .
The workshop will be on every Friday at 4 p.m. .At first we will watch intresting movie about making fastfood ,then we will analyse what we would make people healthier and what for a dishes are reasons of many deaths and disorders.
If you want to know more about food which you are eating ,and if you wanna save your life ,please come to class 89 at school on monday . Everybody are welcome.
xyz
pannieda
To get TO know more about; every Friday (bez ON); AN interesting movie, what would make people healthier (bez WE), what kind of dishes / what dishes (bez FOR A); about the food you eat; come to classroom 89; on Monday; everybody IS welcome
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MargarettaFetta
Pewnie, wszystko jest dobrze jak na moje oko.
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