Czy to jest dobrze napisane ? : (chodzi o opisanie styli) :
Wstęp :
In Poland there are many the fashions. Each of us prefers other. For many fashion is very important. For others, it is unimportant. This how we are dressed, we are combing and what we listening is expressing us. It is important to have one's style and not imitate him than other.
1styl : Punk :
Most Typical looks punk : lub The appearance of a typical punk:
Wear(ing) :
- Dressed in disarray
-Usually jeans, often torn.
-Often denim vests, jackets.
-Sports shoes or glany
-Black blouses with inscriptions or names of groups
Additions:
-safety pins
-badges (Inscriptions or names of groups)
-Brooches
-Earrings
-Tattoos
Hair :
-usually disheveled,
-Iroquois
-shaved head.
However, representatives of the punk movement can be very different . Many has a style entirely unlike to that presented above.
I do not like this style. As this style would not express genuine me .
2styl :
Hip-hop :
Most Typical looks hip-hop : lub The appearance of a typical hip-hop :
Wear(ing) :
-Loose hoodie
-Wide trousers
- Tracksuits
- covering
-Wide boots
- Sport boots
Additions:
-Skateboard
- Earrings
-band on hand
Hair :
Here, the hairs does not matter. They may be straight, curly, long, short, black, blond.
I like this style. Because I love music and dancing. I like the loose things and hoodie and caps.
3styl :
Techno
Most Typical looks techno : lub The appearance of a typical techno :
Wear(ing) :
-blouse
-jeans
- tracksuits
-sport boots
Additions:
- Headphones
- Earrings
- ties
- something on hand
Hair :
Here, the hairs does not matter. They may be straight, curly, long, short, black, blond.
I do not like this style. As this style would not express genuine me .
Błedów tu nie ma, moim zdaniem ja bym to inaczej opisał, był bardziej opisał to co chcesz co jest twoim celem napisania tego.POzdrawiam
ja bym to bardziej rozwineła a najbardziej podpunkty