Question

Czy ten tekst jest napisany porawnie pod względem gramatycznym? :)

Hi Aliosn! How are you? I'm writing to you, because I'm really worried about your unhealthy lifestyle. I want to tell you, what do you need to change. Every day, I take exercise. In the morning, I do crunches, and in the evening, I run. I don't eat candy and fat mealt. Instead, I eat fruits and vegetables. You should eat like me, a lot of practice, and avoid stressful situations. Greetings, XYZ

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Answer 1

Hi Aliosn! - Alison

what do you need to change. - bez 'do'

Every day, I take exercise. - bez 'take' po prostu I exercise everyday.

fat mealt - fat meat

 

You should eat like me, a lot of practice, and avoid stressful situations. Greetings, XYZ

  - You should eat like me, practice a lot and avoid stressfull situations. Good luck XYZ