Question

Czy ten list jest dobrze napisany?

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List:

Hi, ABC
As you know Ann will be celebrate this Saturday. I've got an idea. What about buying a gift together? i think we can buy ticket on concert her favourite bands? I know where we can get this ticket, but I don't know where it is. Could you help me? You know the city better than i. Please, answer me quickly.
See you soon, XYZ

Czy jest okej? Poprawić coś?

Answer 1

Troszeczkę poprawiłem i wygładziłem tu i ówdzie:

 

Hi, ABC
As you know Ann will be celebrating her birthday this Saturday. I've got an idea. What about buying her a gift together? I think we can buy a ticket to the concert of her favourite band. I know the address where we can get the ticket, but I don't know exactly where it is. Could you help me to get there, please? You know the city better than I do. Please, answer me quickly.
See you soon, XYZ