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I would like to tell you about new phone i got from my parents. It's iphone 11 pro.The smartphone color is black.He has three cameras and big touch screen.Yesterday while i was playing a game,phone crashed and screen went black. I want to reset it,but it doesn't turn on. I have two year guarantee so today i went to the phone shop and replace it to a new one.
I would like to tell you about new phone i got from my parents. It's iphone 11 pro.The smartphone color is black.He has three cameras and big touch screen.Yesterday while i was playing a game,phone crashed and screen went black. I want to reset it,but it doesn't turn on. I have two year guarantee so today i went to the phone shop and replace it to a new one.
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I would like to tell you about the new phone I got from my parents. It's an iphone 11 pro. The smartphone's color is black. It has three cameras and a big touch screen. Yesterday while I was playing a game, my phone crashed and the screen went black. I wanted to reset it, but it didn't turn on. I have two year guarantee so today I went to the phone shop and replaced it with a new one.
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