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Dear Rebeca, I hope you're feeling well and everything is fine. I've just moved into a new house. I had mixed feelings about the removals, because I liked my current place of residence. However, my house and surroundings were also fantastic! The new house is bigger than the previous. It is surrounded by a garden full of tall trees. The entire house has been fully equipped. In my room is a wooden desk, a bookcase and a bed next to which there is a bedside cupboard. I would like to invite You to my new house. Maybe we will meet next week? See you soon, XYZ
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Dear Rebeca, I hope you're feeling well and everything is fine. I've just moved into a new house. I had mixed feelings about the moving, because I liked my previous home. However, my house and surroundings were also fantastic (tutaj chcesz poweidzieć o Twoim poprzednim otoczeniu czy aktualnym? Jeśli aktualnym were zmień na are)! The new house is bigger than the previous. It is surrounded by a garden full of tall trees (osobiście bym napisała Beside my house there is a gorgeous garden full of tall trees). The entire house has been fully equipped. In my room is a wooden desk, a bookcase and a bed next to which there is a bedside cupboard. I would like to invite You to my new house. Maybe we will meet next week? See you soon, XYZ
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tala23
I had mixed możesz zmienić na I have mixed, lepiej będzie brzmieć co do całości tekstu.
I hope you're feeling well and everything is fine. I've just moved into a new house. I had mixed feelings about the moving, because I liked my previous home. However, my house and surroundings were also fantastic (tutaj chcesz poweidzieć o Twoim poprzednim otoczeniu czy aktualnym? Jeśli aktualnym were zmień na are)! The new house is bigger than the previous. It is surrounded by a garden full of tall trees (osobiście bym napisała Beside my house there is a gorgeous garden full of tall trees). The entire house has been fully equipped. In my room is a wooden desk, a bookcase and a bed next to which there is a bedside cupboard. I would like to invite You to my new house. Maybe we will meet next week?
See you soon,
XYZ