Question

Czy na pewno dobrze ułożyłam list,bez błędów? sprawdzisz???

bo nie jestem pewna, najbardziej jak sie pisze w osobach itd.

Dear Students,

I am writing to complain about the people In my country who don’t take care their dogs. I again see somewon horrible peolpe who heat their animals and people don’t reagiert! It’s horobble sytuation and we must change it.

As you know, it is very important to save animals. They are friends. They are love as. All animals feall, we must don’t forget it.

There is something we can do. If we respekt dogs their respekt as. If we go to walk with dog, dog will very happy. We must learn reagiert when we see somewon heat animals and stop these sytuation. If sou spęd more time with your dog He will more happy. If everybody help, we can make his problem go away.

Yours sincerely,

dziekuję;]

Answer 1

Popraw:

care of their

someone

horrible zamiast horobble

situation

Bym zmieniła: "They are friends" na They are our best friends."

They are (bez are, skreśl) They love us and we love them. ; ))

All animals feel

We mustn't forget it zamiast "we must don’t forget it"

 If we respekt dogs, they respekt us

iF we go to walk with dog --> napisz If we go walk the dog.

Dog will be very happy.

 

someone nie somewon

someone, who hits animals and we must stop it.

 If you spend more time with your dog, he will be more happy.

 If everybody helps, we can solve this problem and throw it away.\

 

ale jak "Yours sincerely"

sincerely to znaczy szczerze, serdecznie

proponuję Yours i Twoje imię

a na koniec

np. Take care to znaczy trzymajcie się

albo See you soon- do zobaczenia wkrótce

(takie rzeczy się pisze na koniec)

 

 

Poza tym bardzo, bardzo ładnie ; D

 

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