Czy moglibyście sprawdzić poprawnoś tego meila. Nie jestem pewna kilku zdań a konkretnie czy dobrego czasu urzyłam.
Hi Alicja!
How are you doing?
Yesterday I came back from my aunt Anna, who lives lives in London.
I didn't want to come to her because I didn't know her(zanim pojechałam),
but it was fantastic! I met her on airport. She was waiting to me. When I was seeing her I thought: "She's so odd, I want to go home" but than I met her better. She's an artist and I like her because she's so crazy and funny. she showed me around the London and I saw Tower Bridge, Big Ben and many others monuments. She painted my caricature. It was very funny.
We decided to she will come to me next year. We will go to the gallery and we will watch paintings and we will do shopping.
Love, XYZ
Sprawdźcie poprawność tego meila. bedę bardzo wdzięczna.
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Tak jest dobrze, ale chyba What are you doing? co nie?? ;DDDDDDDD
1. zdanie-niepotrzebnie dwa lives (dot. my aunt Anna)
2. I meet her on THE airport.
3. She was waiting FOR me.
4. and any OTHER (bez s)
Aha i uważam że powinno być she TOOK me around (zamiast showed ale nie jestem pewna)
I tak jak mój poprzednik zgadzam się że chyba powinno być WHAT are you doing.
Reszta jets dobrze! Życze powodzenia