czy mógłby mi ktoś sprawdzic esej na angielski i pomóc poprawic błędy ? :))
I would like to express an opinion about mobile phones. There are many advantages and disadvantages of owning this gadget. nowadays, everybody have mobile phone and it is hard to imagine time when there were no telephones at all. Before people used it only for calling and sending text messages, but now phone has many functions such as internet, e-mail, games, music etc. So, is mobile phone our friend or a foe?
Firstly, by mobile phone we can very easily and quickly communicate with people. In one moment we can talk with every person in every location. People don't have to waste a lot of time for writing a letter as they did it formely. It make our life more comfortable and easy. It is very useful when something wrong happen and we can call for help.
Another advantage can be fact that it have many aplications which are very useful for people. People have connection with internet in phone so, everywhere can use email or visit a website. GPS also is very helpful and now many mobilephones have this option.
In the other hand, some people become addicted to a mobile phone. They stop meet with people in real life. They prefer to only call and send text messages. But these are extreme cases
However good the mobile phone is, it has its disadvantages. To be safe, try not to use it all the time and instead of calling a friend, invite him for a face-to-face chat. Use your common sense and enjoy the benefits of this invention without fear.
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I would like to express an opinion about mobile phones. There are many advantages and disadvantages of owning this gadget. Nowadays, everybody has a mobile phone and it is hard to imagine the time when there were no telephones at all. Back in the past, people used it only for calling and sending text messages, but now a phone has many functions such as the Internet, e-mail, games, music etc. So, is a mobile phone our friend or foe?
Firstly, we can very easily and quickly communicate with people by mobile phones. In an instant we can call any person in any location. People do not have to waste a lot of time for writing letters as they did in the past. It has made our life more comfortable and easy. It is very useful when something wrong happens and we can call for help.
Another advantage may be the fact that it has many applications which are very useful for people. People can go online and use email or visit a website everywhere. GPS is also very helpful and many modern mobile phones feature this option.
On the other hand, some people might become addicted to a mobile phone. They stop meeting people in the real life. They prefer calling and sending text messages. But these are extreme cases.
However useful a mobile phone is, it has its disadvantages. To be safe, try not to use it all the time and instead of calling a friend, invite him for a face-to-face chat. Use your common sense and enjoy the benefits of this invention without fear.
Końcówka brzmi bardziej jak w artykule poradnikowym, a nie w eseju. W eseju w ostatnim paragrafie powinno się znaleźć podsumowanie tego co zostało powiedziane dotychczas w eseju (powtórzenie z użyciem innych słów) z ew. dodatkiem nowej informacji/ puentą. Przeredagowałabym tę końcówkę, if I were in your shoes. Zwróć uwagę na swój najczęstszy błąd - it have zamiast it has. Pozdrowionka
I would like to express an opinion about mobile phones. There are many advantages and disadvantages of owning this gadget. nowadays, everybody HAS mobile phone and it is EVEN hard to imagine(nawet ciężko to sobie wyobrazić) how it was when there were no telephones at all. Not very long ago people used it only for calling and sending text messages, but now mobiles phones offer us functions such as surfing on the Internet(the Internet, piszemy zawsze wielką literą),sending e-mails, playing games, listening to music etc. Considering all these, is mobile phone our friend or a foe?
Firstly, by mobile phone we can very easily and quickly communicate with people mobile phones allow us to communicate in easy and effective way withother people. In any moment we are able to contact almostany person in any location. This great invention made communication much less time-consuming than it used to be without mobile phones. What's more this technology plays key role when it comes to any sudden emergenciesas calling for help is a matter of seconds.
Another advantage is the fact that we are offered many aplications which are also very useful in daily life. Access to the internet is much more commonand even there are many places that offer access for free they are called hotspots. GPS also is very helpful and now many mobilephones have this option. The newest mobile phones are even equipped with GPS module what is a very helpful feature without any doubt.
On the other hand, incorrect dealing with this technology may lead to addiction. Addicts often prefer to contact in the virtual way instead of meeting people in real life,but these are the extreme cases.
To sum up, mobile phones have many positive aspects, but it also has its disadvantages. To be safe, try not to use it all the time and instead of calling a friend, invite him to a face-to-face conversation. Use your common sense and enjoy the benefits of this invention without fear.
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