Question

Czy mógłby mi ktoś sprawdzić wypracowanie z angielskiego? Zależy mi głównie na gramatyce i poprawności w pisowni.


Hi Alice!
How are you? I hope you are ok.
You don't belive, but I am in Endyburg on holiday. The Endyburg is a beautiful city in Scotland. It is a capital that country.
In the first day I was in huge castle on hill city and I love him. The castle is very fastinating and impressive. I visited him all day.
I meet owner's son and we will ride a horse around tomorrow. Tom want show me nearby hills and forest. What you think about it?
Here is great! Writte soon Alice.
Love XYZ

Answer 1

Hi Alice!
How are you? I hope YOU'RE ok.
You WON'T beliEve, but I'M in EDINBURGH on holiday. EDINBURGH is a beautiful city in Scotland. IT'S a capital CITY IN THIS country.
ON the first day I WENT TO A huge castle on hill city and I loveD IT. The castle WAS very fasCinating and impressive. I WAS VISITING IT all day.
TOMMOROW I'M GOING TO MEET owner's son and WE'RE GOING TO ride a horse. Tom WILL show me nearby hills and forest. What DO you think about it?
Here is great! WRITE soon.
Love YOU, XYZ
wielkimi literami zaznaczyłam poprawione słowa
nie rozumiem tylko tego "hill city"

Answer 2

1.Endyburg is a beautiful ....
2.It is the capital of Scotland(możesz napisać country jak chcesz ale chyba Scotland jest lepiej).
3.(...)I was in a huge castle on the hill of the city(...).
4.(...)we will ride on horse(...)
I chyba powinnaś pisać że nazywa się Tom.