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Czy mógłby ktoś sprawdzić i poprawić błędy? Tylko proszę o niekorzystanie z tłumacza google, bo to przecież porażka i ja sama mogę tak zrobić ... =)


My hobby isfootball.I like towatch sportsand play initbut the bestis to playcomputer gamesofthese three.Every matchlastsninety minutes.Football teamhasabout twenty-five players.On thegamealways playselevenplayers.The remaining playersaresubstitutes. Theysiton the substitutes bench.
My favouriteteamisReal Madrid from Spain.RMorReal Madridhas twenty-threeplayers.Stadiumwhere thegameis called theSantiago Bernabeu.TheirmanagerisJose Mourinho, and the presidentFlorentino Perez.RMis thebiggestopponent ofFC Barcelona. My favouriteplayersareIker Casillasand CristianoRonaldo.Ikeris a goalkeeperandteam captain. He hasthirty years.Hisbirthday ison the twentiethof May.They callhimElGato. Cristianois the best of team. He is abackor forward. Hisnicknameis CR7. Fourth ofFebruarywill be histwenty-seventh birthday.

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My hobby is football. I like watchingsports and playingit but the playingcomputer gamesis the bestof these three. Every match lasts ninety minutes.A Football team has about twenty-five players.For a game there arealways eleven players. The remaining players are substitutes. They sit on the substitutes bench.
 My favourite team is Real Madrid from Spain. RM or Real Madrid has twenty-three players.They play on the Santiago Bernabeu stadium. Their manager is Jose Mourinho, and the presidentisFlorentino Perez. RM is the biggest opponent of FC Barcelona. My favourite players are Iker Casillas and Cristiano Ronaldo. Iker is a goalkeeper and ateam captain. He isthirty years old. His birthday is on the twentieth of May. They call him El Gato. Cristiano is the bestplayer in his team. He is a back or forward player. His nickname is CR7. On theFourth of Februarythere will be his twenty-seventh birthday. 

 

 

troche pozmienialam zeby mialo to rece i nogi, ogolnie jest spox ;)