Czy mógłby ktoś poprawić błędy? Zależy mi zwłaszcza na "a", "an", "the". Prosiłabym też bardzo, aby poprawiał to ktoś, kto umie angielski b. dobrze ;)
Hello Julia
How are you? I am fine. I arrived to Warsaw. The race was very boring. Also I went to my new school. It is day school for girls and boys too. The school is really fantastic. There is a huge library. You know that I love reading books! There are two big gyms and a tannis court as well. We study the same sucjects as other schools: Maths, Polish, English etc. but we have more sports.
People are wonderful. Everyone is friendly, clever and honest. I have three best friends here: Mateusz, Ania and Ola. You must know them! We often go to a cinema and to shopping malls.
Yesterday I joined the swimming club. I thought it will be easy but now I know: it is really dufficult. I joined the basketball team either. I think I am the worst player in the team.
I hope you are okay. E-mail me soon. I miss you.
Kasia
Hello Julia
How are you? I am fine. I arrived to Warsaw. The race was a very boring. Also I went to my new school. It is day school for girls and boys too. The school is a really fantastic. There is a huge library. You know that I love reading a books! There are two big gyms and a tannis court as well. We are studying the same subjects as other schools: Maths, Polish, English etc. but we are having a more sports.
People are wonderful. Everyone is friendly, clever and honest. I have three best friends here: Mateusz, Ania and Ola. You must meet them! We often go to a cinema and go to shopping malls.
Yesterday I joined the swimming club. I thought it will be easy but now I know: it is really dufficult. I joined the basketball team either. I think I am the worst player in the team.
I hope you are okay. E-mail me soon. I miss you.
Kasia
Hello Julia
How are you? I'm fine. I'm arrived to Warsaw. The race was very boring. Also I went to my new school. It's a school for girls and boys. This school is fantastic. There's a huge library. I love reading books! There're two big gyms and a tennis court. We study the same subjects: Maths, Polish, English etc. but we have more sports.
People are wonderful. Everyone is friendly, clever and honest. I have three best friends here: Mateusz, Ania and Ola. You must know them! We often go to the cinema and shopping malls.
Yesterday I joined the swimming club. I thought it will be easy but now I know: it is really dufficult! I joined the basketball team either. I think I'm the worst player in the team.
I think that at you everything well. E-mail me soon.
I miss you.
Love from Kasia
Jestem w 1 klasie gim, więc mam nadzieję, że wszystko jest teraz ok ;)
Cztając rozwiązanie koleżanki wyżej miałam kilka wątpliwości ;/ W niektórych miejscach niepotrzebnie dodałaś przymiotniki. Jeśli piszesz zdanie staraj się przy np. This school is really fantastic - po co tu really ? Jeśli szkoła jest fantastyczna to nie trzeba dopisywać naprawdę - wystarczy fantastyczna :) Mam nadzieję, że w przyszłości zastosujesz się do moich rad :) Pozdrawiam, Ewa :*