Czy może mi ktoś to sprawdzić i poprawić w razie jakiś błędów?
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I work on a film plan as an actress. My BESt day at work was my birthday on last year. When I came to work in the morning they wasn’t abybody. I was calling anybody here but there was complete silence. When I entered to my warderobe everyone said Suprised! I was suprised nad happy. They was a cake and dance party, it was a great time. The pary was organized my best colleague. I love this work and these people.
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I work on a film plan as an actress. My BESt day at work was my birthday on last year. When I came to work in the morning they wasn’t abybody. I was calling anybody here but there was complete silence. When I entered to my warderobe everyone said Suprised! I was suprised nad happy. They was a cake and dance party, it was a great time. The pary was organized my best colleague. I love this work and these people.
Odpowiedź:
1-źle napisane "anybody"
2-nie "Suprised" tylko suprise i cudzysłowy
3-There nie They
4-party pie pary
5- Jak już to "by my best colleague"
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