Czy może mi ktoś sprawdzić tekst który napisałam po angielsku bo niewiem czy dobrze napisałam?
Most people is dream about bein famous. They want to be admired and loved by fan's. Media want schow the rich and beautiful celebrites and it is belived that thier life is full of joy and pleasure. There are some advantages.
Celebrites can afford to buy what they wont. They have a lot money, fast cars and beautiful apartaments. However, there are some disadvantages.
Famous people doesn't have privacy. They can't exit to shop because they do all about them photo. As Marilyn Monroe use to which committed suicide. Otherwise fame brings a lot stress.
I'm not would like to. Because famous people are dependent from his work and have little time.
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dreaming about being,
fans, show, they want, a lot of, zdanie od słowa they do all about them photo kompletnie bez sensu, zdania z Marilyn nie zaczynaj od as ( zdania z as powinny się od niego zaczynać i w polowie zdania powinno być drugie as - w takich zdaniach porownujemy cos do siebie),
znow a lot of stress,A zakonczyc mozesz I dont want to be famous because itd
Most people ARE DREAMING about FAME . They want TO be admired and loved by THEIR fans. Media wants SHOW THEIR BEAUTY (tak będzie lepiej :] ) It's TRUE that their life is full of joy and pleasure [...] Celebrites can afford to bue what they WANT.
[ ... ] I WOULDN'T LIKE TO , BEACAUSE FAMUS PEOPLE ARE DEPENDENT FROM HIS WORK AND DON'T HAVE A LOT OF TIME .
reszta wydaje mi się, że jest ok. :)