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Temat wypracowania:
Wyjechałeś na kurs językowy do Szkocji. Podziel się swoimi wrażeniami na blogu. (80-130 słów) 1.Napisz jak znalazłeś pokój i poinformuj o warunkach najmu (wynajmowania). 2.Opisz niedogodności dotyczące umeblowania pokoju oraz poinformuj jak sobie z nimi poradziłeś. 3.Określ swoje oczekiwania i obawy wobec mającego się jutro zacząć kursu. 4.Wspomnij że gospodarz szuka jeszcze jednego lokatora i zasugeruj dlaczego warto zainteresować się tą ofertą.
Treść:
I found a perfect room in the local newspaper. In the adverisement were several offers but i choosen flat next to school. Rent is small. I have to pay just 500 per month. In addition kitchen a bathroom are fully furnished. Only problem i have with bedroom and more precisely with bed. It was very uncomfortable soo I went to the mall and found a new mattress.I didn't payed much becouse he was on bargain.
The course starts tomorrow and i have hope that i finally will learn english perfectly.
As we know I am little shy and i am worry that i won't meet anyone. What if I all course will be have to seat alone?
And by the way the host is looking for another lodger. I think that this offert is realy great for someone who look for cheap room.
Za sprawdzenie bardzo dziękuje i obiecuje naj:)
Temat wypracowania:
Wyjechałeś na kurs językowy do Szkocji. Podziel się swoimi wrażeniami na blogu. (80-130 słów) 1.Napisz jak znalazłeś pokój i poinformuj o warunkach najmu (wynajmowania). 2.Opisz niedogodności dotyczące umeblowania pokoju oraz poinformuj jak sobie z nimi poradziłeś. 3.Określ swoje oczekiwania i obawy wobec mającego się jutro zacząć kursu. 4.Wspomnij że gospodarz szuka jeszcze jednego lokatora i zasugeruj dlaczego warto zainteresować się tą ofertą.
Treść:
I found a perfect room in the local newspaper. In the adverisement were several offers but i choosen flat next to school. Rent is small. I have to pay just 500 per month. In addition kitchen a bathroom are fully furnished. Only problem i have with bedroom and more precisely with bed. It was very uncomfortable soo I went to the mall and found a new mattress.I didn't payed much becouse he was on bargain.
The course starts tomorrow and i have hope that i finally will learn english perfectly.
As we know I am little shy and i am worry that i won't meet anyone. What if I all course will be have to seat alone?
And by the way the host is looking for another lodger. I think that this offert is realy great for someone who look for cheap room.
Za sprawdzenie bardzo dziękuje i obiecuje naj:)
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Pierwsze zdanie jest dobrze.:
In the adverTisement section I came across several offers and I chose a flat next to my school.
The rent is quite low - only $500 per month.
What is more, a kitchen and a bathroom are fully equipped.
Unfortunately, a bed is very uncomfortable SO I went to the shopping mall and bought a new mattress. I didn't PAY much becAuse it was on bargain.
The course... and I hope that I will finally learn English perfectly.
I am a shy person so I worry that I won't make any friend.
What if I will have to SIT alone during every course lessons?
By the way, the landlord has some flats for another tenants. I think that this offer is really good for someone who looks for a cheap room.