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Pets becomming more popular and everyone knows it, but is it good or is it bad? This is the question i`m going to answer in this essay.
First of all let`s talk about advantages of having a pet, pets are really good companions they are happy to go with you (dogs), some pets are
just good looking as a part of your room for example fishes in aquarium.
Secondly disadvantages are the thing that you need to go for a walk with it every day even if you dont want to, you must pay much cash to
feed them every day, they are often making extra costs for example cat that climbing up on curtain.
Assumming in my opinion pets are good for peoples who have time for them and have enough patient to keep them healthy and happy and are
bad for peoples who have long time jobs and have no time for pet.
Pets ARE BECOMING more popular and everyone knows it, but is it good or is it bad IDEA? This is the question I AM going to answer in this essay.
First of all let`s talk about advantages of having a pet, pets are really good companions they are happy to go OUT with you (dogs), some pets are
just good looking as a part of your room for example fishes in aquarium. THE MOST IMPORTANT IS THEY CAN BE YOUR FRIENDS, THEY CANNOT TALK BUT THEY CAN COMFORT YOU WHEN YOU ARE SAD.
Secondly THERE ARE ALSO DISADVANTAGES FOR EXAMPLE that you need to go for a walk with it every day even if you do not want to, you must SPEND A LOT OF cash to
feed them every day, they are often making extra costs for example cat, WHICH IS climbing up on curtain. IT IS ALSO A RESPONSIBILITY FOR TAKING CARE OF YOUR PET, FOR EXAMPLE TAKING IT TO THE VET.
Assumming in my opinion pets are good IDEA for PEOPLE who have time for them and have enough patient to keep them healthy and happy and THEY are
bad IDEA for peoples who have FULL time jobs and have no time for pet.
Dodałam trochę od siebie. Starałam się poprawić wszystkie błędy. Usunęłam skróty typu "don't", "I'm", bo nasza nauczycielka mówiła, że w wypracowaniach powinna się używać pełnych form.
Pets are becoming more and more popular and everyone knows it, but is it good or bad? This is the question I am going to answer in this essay.
First of all, let us talk about the advantages of having a pet. Pets are really good companions. They are happy to go with you for walks (e.g. dogs). Some pets just look good as a part of your room, for example fish in an aquarium. What is more, pets often make their owners happier because they always have someone to spend their time with.
However, there are also some disadvantages. You need to go for walks with your pet every day, even if you do not want to. You must spend a lot of money (cash <-- zbyt potoczne) to
feed them every day or buy them toys (as they need entertainment, too). They often make extra costs, for example when a cat climbs up a curtain.
In my opinion, pets are good for people who have enough time and patience to keep them healthy and happy. They are bad for people who work long hours and have no time for their pet.