Czy ktos moze sprawdzić mi krotkie opowiadanie na temat "go out" w czasie past simple. oto one:
It was at the last weekend, on Friday. I went out with my best friend who I met when I begin studies. I wore a nice dress and a comfortable black shoes. My friend wore blue skirt, white shirt and her favourite high-heeled shoes.First we went to the cinema we made a reservation in advance.It was a romantic comedy.This movie we liked. Next we went to our favourite restaurant for a dinner. We had a salmon with chips and water to drink.We talked about studies and our plans for the feature. Later we had a meeting in a pub on the market. There were a Birthday-Party our friend, she finished 23.We had a good time there, we danced and we drank a few drinks. When it become late we got a taxi because my friend had a high-heeled shoes and she felt pain. We left pub at about 1.30 and we got home at 2.00. It was very nice afternoon and night.
It was at the last weekend, on Friday. I went out with my best friend who I met when I begin studies. I wore a nice dress and a comfortable black shoes. My friend wore blue skirt, white shirt and her favourite high-heeled shoes.First we went to the cinema we made a reservation in advance.It was a romantic comedy.This movie we liked. Next we went to our favourite restaurant for a dinner. We had a salmon with chips and water to drink.We talked about studies and our plans for the feature. Later we had a meeting in a pub on the market. There were a Birthday-Party our friend, she finished 23.We had a good time there, we danced and we drank a few drinks. When it become late we got a taxi because my friend had a high-heeled shoes and she felt pain. We left pub at about 1.30 and we got home at 2.00. It was very nice afternoon and night.
This movie we liked.
zmieniłabym je lepiej na : We enjoyed that movie.