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Dear diary
You can't believe what happened last day. We were recording film.I went to the dark cave when giant python attacked me. I was do afraid,it was terrible feeling. I saw in his eyes and he was incensed. He wrapped itself around my legs. Really in that moment I can't be unperturbed even if I had contact with wild animals. Suddenly he bit me and I was more appalled.
Dear diary
You can't believe what happened last day. We were recording film.I went to the dark cave when giant python attacked me. I was do afraid,it was terrible feeling. I saw in his eyes and he was incensed. He wrapped itself around my legs. Really in that moment I can't be unperturbed even if I had contact with wild animals. Suddenly he bit me and I was more appalled.
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You can't believe what happened YESTERDAY. We were recording A film. I went to the dark cave , when A giant python attacked me. I was So afraid. It was A terrible feeling. I saw in his eyes THAT IT was incensed. IT wrapped itself around my legs. Really in that moment I can't be unperturbed even if I had contact with wild animals. - to zdanie nie ma zbytnio sensu.
Suddenly IT bit me and I was EVEN more appalled.
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