Question

Czy ktoś mógłby sprawdzić czy te zdania są napisane poprawnie i ewentualnie je poprawić. Można dowolnie je zmienić, aby tylko zachowały sens.

I don't eat junk food often, once or twice a month. For example pizza, hamburgers and French fries. I don't like this food because it's harmful to health.

In my opinion I have a healthy diet. I eat many vegetables and fruits. I usually don't eat chips, pizza and other unhealthy food.

I watching TV 1 hours every day, when after school.

I exercise 4 times a week. I go to the swimming pool and sometimes I play basketball.

I could spend a less hours playing computer games so my lifestyle will be healthier.

Ponadto jeszcze proszę o przetłumaczenie tych zdań:

Oglądam tv przez 1 godz w ciągu dnia, kiedy wrócę ze szkoły. Ćwiczę 4 razy w tyg, w piątki chodzę na basen, codziennie biegam i czasami gram w koszykówkę.

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I don't often eat junk food, once or twice a month. For example - pizza, hamburgers and French fries. I don't like this food because it's harmful to health.

In my opinion I have a healthy diet. I eat many vegetables and fruit. I usually don't eat chips, pizza and other unhealthy food.

I watch TV 1 hour every day after school.

I exercise 4 times a week. I go to the swimming pool and I sometimes play basketball.

I could spend fewer hours playing computer games so that my lifestyle will be healthier.

 

Often może być na końcu zdania, ale lepiej brzmi po "don't". Fruit ma tylko liczbe pojedynczą (jest kilka wyjątków, ale nie tutaj :P). Fewer używamy do policzalnych, natomiast less do niepoliczalnych. (I'll try to eat fewer dishes/ I'll try to eat less food)

 

W piątki chodzę na basen - I go to the swimming pool on Fridays

Codziennie biegam i czasami gram w koszykówkę. - I go jogging every day and I sometimes play basketball

 

Pozdrawiam :)