Czy ktoś mógłby dokonać korekty? Miałam do napisania OFICJALNY e-mail, nauczycielka jednak powiedziała, że jest błędny i mam poprawić i jutro oddać, jednak nie wiem jak i gdzie są błędy. Oto treść:
"Dear Willy Wonka Company,
Thank you very much for chosen my suggestion of new flavour chocolate. I'm very pleased and I am looking forward to visit your chocolate factory in Switzerland! But first of all, I would like to ask about date of travel. I would also like to know what with travel arrangements, are we going to fly by plane or we gona travel by bus? I don't know also place of accommodation, so please for information. Next, I hate to ask for so much, but I have to. Is still the option that my friend, Ola, also travel to chocolate factory and stau with me there for free? Thank you one again and I look forward to hearing back from you soon.
Your sincerely,
XYZ."
Proszę o pomóc, wprowadzenie ewentualnej korekty słów, czasów, zdań czy cokolwiek tam jest źle. Niestety ja nie widzę co zrobiłam nie tak i nie jestem w stanie sama się poprawić.
"Dear Willy Wonka Company,
Thank you very much for chosen my suggestion of new flavour chocolate. I'm very pleased and I am looking forward to visit your chocolate factory in Switzerland! But first of all, I would like to ask about date of travel. I would also like to know what with travel arrangements, are we going to fly by plane or we gona travel by bus? I don't know also place of accommodation, so please for information. Next, I hate to ask for so much, but I have to. Is still the option that my friend, Ola, also travel to chocolate factory and stau with me there for free? Thank you one again and I look forward to hearing back from you soon.
Your sincerely,
XYZ."
Proszę o pomóc, wprowadzenie ewentualnej korekty słów, czasów, zdań czy cokolwiek tam jest źle. Niestety ja nie widzę co zrobiłam nie tak i nie jestem w stanie sama się poprawić.
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Thank you very much for choosing my suggestion of a new flavour of chocolate. I am (w officjalnym liscie bez skrotow) very pleased and I am looking forward to visiting your chocolate factory in Switzerland! First of all, I would like to ask when would I be traveling? Secondly, could you tell me what the travel arrangements are? Are we going to fly by plane or we going to travel by bus? Could you also provide me with accommodation details? If it is possible, I would like to ask for a favour! Could my friend, Ola, accompany me in my trip to the chocolate factory and stay with me for free?
Thank you once again and I am looking forward to hearing back from you soon.
Your sincerely,
XYZ."