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Last Holiday I was in London with my uncle Sebastian. One day we went ( tu ma być zwiedzać ) city. It was Sunny and Clear . We were in the Towe Bridge . Together wit my uncle admired the vievs. Duddenly in the middle of Tower Bridge we saw a ( tu ma być przezroczysty ) ghost. We were scared but we decided to go in. It was a woman. She was beautiful wearing a long , green coat with umbrella in hand. We heard strange noises. The woman looked at me. Her eyes were horrible! . Byłam przerażona ( nie wiem jak to jest po angielsku ) We started to run away and we chased the ghost!. There was a second scream and the ghost disappeared. Together with my uncle went to back to the hotel. When we told them the story my parents they didn't believed us!.
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proszę o pomoc kogoś kto ma 5 z angielskiego! żebny to bylo bardzo dobrze! wiem że pewnie tu jest mnóśtwo błędów i z góry przepraszam!
jeśli ktoś mógłby ( niekoniecznie ) przetłumaczyć to na język polski jak on to widzi.
bardzo bardzo dziękuje!!
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Last Holiday i was In London with my uncle Sebastian. One Day we visited the city. It was sunny and tere weren’t Any cloud.We Saw Tower Bridge. Me and my uncle admired the views.Suddenly In the Middle od the Tower bridge we Saw a transparent ghost. We were scared but we decided to go closer . It was a woman. She was beautiful. She was wering a long, green coat and she had an umbrella. We heard strange noises. The woman was horrible. I was terrified. We started run away .There was a second scream and the ghost disappeared. Me and my uncle returned to the hotel. When we told the story to my parents, they didn’t believed us.