Question

Czy ktoś może sprawdzić, czy ten tekst jest dobrze napisany? Nie chodzi mi o translator -,- tam to sobie samemu można sprawdzić. Chodzi mi o poprawną budowę zdań i użycie wyrazów.

I'm going to talk about th panda bears. First, the panda bears live in the bamboo forests of Asia. They have from 60 to 80 centimeters high at the shoulder and they are colored to balck and white. Their hair is a great protection against the cold. Pandas live 20 to 30 years. They have a sixth finger opposite and they have vertical pupils, like cats. Next, Pandas usually live alone. They communicate only for reproduction. In August of the world come from 1 to 3 young. Panda bears eat bamboo and they spend 16 hours on the acquisition of food. Pandas are dying because people hunt them and cut bamboo trees. In China, there are 12 reserves for the panda bears.

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Answer 1

Dobrze napisales ja nie dostrzegam żadnych bledow. Niestety taka dlugosc u mojej Pani od Angielskiego by nie przeszla :D Powodzenia :)

Answer 2

I'm going to say/write about panda bears. First, panda bears live in the bamboo trees in Asia. They have from 60 to 80 centimetres high. They are black and white. Their fur is great protection against the cold. Panda bears live for 20 to 30 years. They have six fingers. Pandas usually live alone. They communicate only for reproduction. In August, from 1 to 3 young pandas come to the world. Panda bears eat bamboo and tey spend 16 hours on the acquisition of food. Pandas are dying because, people are hunting them and cuting their homes, bamboo trees. In China, there are 12 reserves for the panda bears. We can save their lives by getting more sustainable.

 

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PS: Parę informacji usunęłam, gdyż nie rozumiałam co chciałeś napisać, poprawiłam i dodałam coś ;)