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One day group teenager were going a camping in the forest. It wasn't normal day. They were drivin in 31 October in Halloween. The trip was promising good, while set in a night. When was alredy getting tall dark there's no knowing begin flunk out ghost. Students were trying hide in front of vision, run off in a forest. There are find a old lodge in a wetland. There weren't know, that a lodge belonge thouth to witch hide there an never get back. Whele are a report, that can something hear shouting teenager strike a lodge.
Minigamemaster01
"Group of teenager..." drivin‘" moze być. A poza tym jest dobrze
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heheszkistyle
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