Czy jest ktoś dobry z angielskiego, żeby mi to sprawdzić. To na jutro, jest to dla mnie ważne. Proszę. Ostrzegam także, że ten kto napisze odpowiedz nie na temat i wykorzysta te punkty, będzie zgłoszony. Z góry dziękuję :)
Dear Mom and Dad,
How are you? I hope you're fine. I'm writing to you because I want to tell you something about my camp.
My first impression was bad because hotel is untidy. By the way here is so beautiful and awesome! From my window I can see a forest and a lake. I live in small room with a few nice girls. I like them.
I met here a lot of lovable people. We have fun and we spend a good time together. I'm never bored. Tomorrow we're going on a trip.
I forgot to take my shampoo and towel. I also need a little more money because all things in shops are expensive.
Could you send me things I forgot to take? I really need them. Thanks a lot.
Love you
XYZ
Dear Mom and Dad,
How are you? I hope you're fine. I'm writing to you because I want to tell you something about my camp.
My first impression was bad because hotel is untidy. By the way here is so beautiful and awesome! From my window I can see a forest and a lake. I live in small room with a few nice girls. I like them.
I met here a lot of lovable people. We have fun and we spend a good time together. I'm never bored. Tomorrow we're going on a trip.
I forgot to take my shampoo and towel. I also need a little more money because all things in shops are expensive.
Could you send me things I forgot to take? I really need them. Thanks a lot.
Love you
XYZ
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My first impression was bad because hotel was untidy. But despite that the area is beautiful and awesome
I met here a lot of lovable people. - nienajlepiej brzmi to 'lovable' . Lepiej daj 'very friendly'
Could you send me things WHICH I forgot to take?
reszta jest nawet w porzadku
hotel was* untidy
I never bored
Reszta chyba jest poprawnie ;)