Question

czy e-mail jest dobrze napisany ? jeśli coś jest źle proszę o poprawę :)

hi Ola.

I have just moved into a new house in London. At first,I missed my old home in Warsaw very much, but later. Imadesome really good friends and I began to like this place in England. Of course I sometimes cry and still miss Warsaw, but my new house is really fantastic! It is big, has a huge garden, and swimming pool. The mostI miss you and the old school.

Answer 1

tak 

 

Answer 2

troszkę Ci zmodyfikowałam Twój list, ale sens ten sam ;)

 

Hi Ola,

I have just moved into new house in London. I can tell you that I really miss my old home in Warsaw. Here I've got really nice friends and I began to like this place in England. Sometimes I cry becouse I still miss my home in Warsaw. But my new home is really fantastic. I have big garden and swimming pool. It's perfect !

I miss you and my old school so much.

Love you, XYZ.