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I usually wake up at 7.00 . Next get up and go to bathroom . I wash my face , brush my teeth and got dressed . I leave home at 7.50 . I takes me 10 minutes to get school. I start school 8.00 and finish at 14.25 . I get home . I eat lunch . I often hang out with friends or do home work . In the afternoon have dinner . I have a shower . I usually go to bed at 10.00 . I read book or watch TV. I fall asleep at 11.00.
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I usually wake up at 7.00 . Next I get up and go to the bathroom . I wash my face , brush my teeth and get dressed . I leave home at 7.50 . It takes me 10 minutes to get to school. I start my lessons at 8.00 and finish at 14.25 . Then I go home . I eat lunch . I often hang out with friends or do homework . In the afternoon I have dinner . I take a shower . I usually go to bed at 10.00 . I read book or watch TV. I fall asleep at 11.00.
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1 linijka: Next I get up (musi być osoba)
moim zdaniem lepiej będzie then niż next
2 linijka: I dress zamiast got dressed
It takes me zamiast I takes me
get to school
3 linijka: start lessons
Proponowałabym w jednym zdaniu napisać Then I get home and eat lunch
4 linijka: homework razem
take a shower
5 linijka: I have dinner (osoba)