Question

Czy dobrze napisałam?
Bo zanoszę jutro projekt i dobrze napisałam?
"My name's Hania.I'm thirteen years old and in Kamienna Góra.I want to tell you about my hobbies and interests.I really like listeing to music.I like bunny.I'm not into football.Football is boring and horrible.I hate chatting onilne and metting friends.My best friend it Julia.I love photography,it is my greatest passion.I'm interesed in blogging.I've got a new camera"
dobrze?:) A jak nie,to co poprawić?:)

Answer 1

Powinno być:
I'm thirteen yars old and I'm from Kamienna Góra. 
I really like listening to music.
I like bunnies.
I hate chatting online and meeting friends.
My best friend is Julia

Answer 2

My name's Hania. I'm thirteen years old and I'm from Kamienna Gora. I want to tell you something about my hobbies and interests. I really like listening to music. I like bunnies. I'm not interested in football. Football is boring and terrible. I hate chatting online and meeting friends. My best friend is Julia. I love photography, it is my greatest passion. I'm interested in blogging. I've got a new camera.