Question

Chodzi o to, że musiałam napisać po angielsku o pracy kogoś sławnego. Wybrałam Eminema. tam były podane pytania. Napisałam to, ale czy dobrze gramatycznie? moglibyście to sprawdzić? jak mam coś źle to napiszcie jak mam to poprawić. dzięki :)

This is Emibem. He's an american rap singer. Eminem works when reading music, write texts song and durning concerts. His job is cool. He earns a lot of money very much. Eminem is good in his job. I think he likes.

Answer 1

This is Eminem. He's an american rap singer. Eminem works in the music industry, he writes songs and performs at his own concerts. His job is cool. He earns a lot of money. Eminem is good at his profession. I think he likes his job.