Chodzi mi o to zeby ktos kto DOBRZE potrafi jezyk angieski skorygowal mi te notke ,ewentualnie napisal podobna utrzymujac ten sam temat ,osobe i ogolnie fabule .Dziekuje z gory :] Nie wystracza mi proste odpowiedzi , chcialbym miec wyjasnienie czemu tak a czemu tak.
The during training a shark attacked young Bethany Hamilton. he bit off for her left for frame, crippled girl of the clash a lot of blood and was taken to hospital. The girl didn't give up already after ten months she returned to sport, at present a leader is having great chances to stay amongst women surfing .But for now can not find a sponsor
During the training a shark attacked young Bethany Hamilton. It (jedynie o ludziach mówimy "she, he") bit off her left leg (?), crippled by the clash girl lost a lot of blood and was taken to the hospital. Girl didn't give up. Already after ten months she returned to sport. At present she is a leader to stay amongst women surfing. But for now she can't find a sponsor.