Chciałabym żebyście sprawdzili moje wypracowanie. Napiszcie czy jest dobrze, co byście zmienili, jakie są błędy itd... To jest opis mojego ulubionego filmu według przykładu z książki.
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One my favourite films is "Death Note". It's Japanese film. I saw it in the Japanese version but with subbtles Polish.Dirested by Tsugami Oba. There are 3 parts film.I'm looking 1 part.
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This is a thriller film. Abaut a boy which is a notebook in which you can enter the names of people who have died. They die of a heart attack. It begins with an investigation to find the person who does it. It is Light Yagami who is 17 years old.
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I do not know why I like this movie. She told me about him friend, watched him and like him.My favorite character is Lawliet Lawsford wchich appears under the name "L". It is 24 years ago.He is the best policeman who work in the CBA. And he comes to this , that the mysterious Kira is Light Yagami.Althaught other it does not show.
Wyjątkowo dużo tych błędów się naliczyłem... Najlepiej będzie, jak przepiszę w poprawionej wersji.
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One of my favourite films is 'Death Note'. It's a Japanese film, directed by Tsugami Oba. I've seen it in Japanese version, but with Polish subtitles. The are 3 parts of the film. I've watched one of them already.
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This is a thriller film about a boy who has a notebook, and if you write someone's name in it, he or she will die of heart attack. The film begins with an investigation - they're trying to find a person who does it. It's 17-year-old Light Yagami.
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I don't know why I like this film. My friend told me about it, so I've watched it and liked it. My favourite character is Lawliet Lawsford who appears under the name 'L'. It's happening 24 years ago. He is the best policeman in CBA. He realises that mysterious Kira is Light Yagami, although the others don't think so.
Wybacz za ciągłe edytowanie, ale mam literówko-twórczą klawiaturę :P