prosze o sprawdzenie
ON holiday i was in Madryt . One day was very hot so i went with my friend on the beach. there were a lot of people .people were sunbathing, in playing the ball and laughed. when I talked with my friend suddenly noticed a dark cloud in the sky. every moment was getting darker. suddenly there was a violent earthquake. people started to panic and was runing. me and my friend on a huge towers. we fled when the sea was a great wave. suddenly started to lighyning strike. i saw the tower as wather flooded the city. some people were drowned. it was horrible. after three o'clock of the tsunami (ustało) ;/
bardzo prosze o sprawdzenie. ma to byc straszna historia zwiazana z tsunami w czasie przeszym ciagłym i prostym. daje naj!
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ON holiday I was in Madryt . One day was very hot so i went with my friend on the beach. There were a lot of people,who were sunbathing,playing the ball and laughed. when I talked with my friend suddenly saw a dark cloud in the sky. every moment it was getting darker. suddenly there was a violent earthquake. people started to panic and runing away. me and my friend on a huge towers. we fled when the sea was a great wave. suddenly started to lighyning strike. i saw the tower as wather flooded the city. some people were drowned. it was horrible. after three hours the tsunami was gone.
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ustało - was gone
to zdanie jest napisane dobrze (tak na 90%)