Question

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Heavymetalowcy to niewielka grupa ludzi. Słuchają ostrego rocka, hard rocka, heavymetalu i czasami punk rocka. Ubrani zawsze na czrno w obcisłe czarne dżinsy i koszulki z ulubionymi zespołami. Chłopacy mają najczęściej długie włosy za ramiona. Nosza kolczyki, najczęściej w brwi lub w brodzie. Są to miłe osoby, jeśli ktoś im nie przeszkadza. Lubią wolność. Lubią grać na gitarze, a kiedy to robią kręcą głowami. Często chodzą na koncert swoich ulubionych zespołów.

Heavymetalowcy is a small group of people. Listen to hot rock, hard rocka, heavymetalu and sometimes punk rocka. Always dressed in tight black jeans and T-shirt with your favourite team. Boys are usually long hair by the shoulders. They wear aerrings mostly in the eyebrows or bread. They are nice people, if someone does not bother then. Like freedom.
Like to play the guitar, and when they do shake their heads. Often go to concerts of their favourite teams.

Answer 1

Heavymetal guy's is a small group of people. Listening acute Rock, hard rock, heavymetal and sometimes punk. Always dressed in tight black jeans and black shirts with their favorite teams. Boys are usually long hair by the shoulders. Wear earrings, mostly in the eyebrow and the chin. They are nice people, if someone does not bother them. They love freedom. They like to play the guitar, and when they do shake their heads. Often go to a concert of their favorite teams.

Answer 2

'Heavymetalowcy' is not big group of man. They listen to hard rock, heavy metal and sometimes punk rock. Always dressed in tight black jeans and t-shirts with favourite band. Guys usually have got a long hair by the shoulders. They wear aerrings mostly in the eyebrows or bread. They are nice people, if someone does not bother then. They like freedom and they're playing guitar and when they do this, they're shaking their heads. Often go to concerts of their favourite bands.