Aparte de estas emociones hay más? y la historia en ingles esta bien escrita o no? Si no esta bien escrita me ayudan?
flordeceibo
It is my birthday. I woke up early. I was feeling happy. My parents gave me a present for my birthday. I was excited. I went to school. There all my classmates sang to me the "Happy Birthday" song. They also gave me presents. I returned home. My brothers and sisters gave me some gifts too. They have made a big chocolate birthday cake. We sang again. We were very happy together.
Finally my aunts, uncles, cousins and grandparents came home. We had a great time.
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LisyPRO
En realidad, hay gente que pone palabras distintas, aunque yo solo digo que para mi esta perfectamente, porque en en cuenta que hay distintas palabras que puede utilizar.
I went to school. There all my classmates sang to me the "Happy Birthday" song. They also gave me presents.
I returned home. My brothers and sisters gave me some gifts too. They have made a big chocolate birthday cake. We sang again. We were very happy together.
Finally my aunts, uncles, cousins and grandparents came home. We had a great time.