Mistake 2: "At first, I felt my body became weird then I fainted when I was studying in the classroom."
Correction 2: "At first, I felt my body becoming weird, and then I fainted while I was studying in the classroom."
Mistake 3: "Then, I was brought to the hospital because of the high fever."
Correction 3: "Then, I was taken to the hospital because of a high fever."
Mistake 4: "At the hospital, I was brought into the emergency unit."
Correction 4: "At the hospital, I was admitted to the emergency unit."
Mistake 5: "According to the doctor, I was tainted by dengue fever."
Correction 5: "According to the doctor, I was infected with dengue fever."
Mistake 6: "Finally, I had to sleep there for one week."
Correction 6: "Finally, I had to stay there for one week."
Mistake 7: "Every day the doctor gave me on a drip."
Correction 7: "Every day, the doctor gave me a drip."
Mistake 8: "After the final check, the doctor forbid me permission to go home."
Correction 8: "After the final check, the doctor refused to give me permission to go home."
Mistake 9: "Now, I'm okay and because of my illness, I am now more cautious about keeping in my house clean especially my room, I don't want to get the same disease again."
Correction 9: "Now, I'm okay, and because of my illness, I am now more cautious about keeping my house clean, especially my room. I don't want to get the same disease again."
Mistake 10: "The doctor forbid me permission to go home."
Correction 10: "The doctor refused to give me permission to go home."
Jawaban:
Mistake 1: "I was in hospital last week."
Correction 1: "I was in the hospital last week."
Mistake 2: "At first, I felt my body became weird then I fainted when I was studying in the classroom."
Correction 2: "At first, I felt my body becoming weird, and then I fainted while I was studying in the classroom."
Mistake 3: "Then, I was brought to the hospital because of the high fever."
Correction 3: "Then, I was taken to the hospital because of a high fever."
Mistake 4: "At the hospital, I was brought into the emergency unit."
Correction 4: "At the hospital, I was admitted to the emergency unit."
Mistake 5: "According to the doctor, I was tainted by dengue fever."
Correction 5: "According to the doctor, I was infected with dengue fever."
Mistake 6: "Finally, I had to sleep there for one week."
Correction 6: "Finally, I had to stay there for one week."
Mistake 7: "Every day the doctor gave me on a drip."
Correction 7: "Every day, the doctor gave me a drip."
Mistake 8: "After the final check, the doctor forbid me permission to go home."
Correction 8: "After the final check, the doctor refused to give me permission to go home."
Mistake 9: "Now, I'm okay and because of my illness, I am now more cautious about keeping in my house clean especially my room, I don't want to get the same disease again."
Correction 9: "Now, I'm okay, and because of my illness, I am now more cautious about keeping my house clean, especially my room. I don't want to get the same disease again."
Mistake 10: "The doctor forbid me permission to go home."
Correction 10: "The doctor refused to give me permission to go home."