Alguien que me pueda hacer un historia corta en ingles(short story)de 140 a 190 palabras.
dimitrimdlv
On the year 2523 there was a bandit, known by everybody. Everyone feared and respected him. No one even dared to look him in the eyes.<br /><br />But he was growing old. His strenght was not as reliable as on his youth days. <br /><br />When he was around 70 years old, he met Clarissa. Oh, Clarissa feared no one, not even Ray, the old bandit. Clarissa was only 11 years old when she first met him. I remember hers staring at his snake-like eyes, without even blinking. Ray hold it for a few minutes, on which he was thinking about the courage of that little girl, about how his body had started to sore a few years ago. He wondered how could she do that when no body else could.<br /><br />He long meditated on how he was going to strangle her in front of everyone to let them know who's still the boss. He might not be as strong and fast as he used to be back in the day, but hell, he could still do such an easy thing. He thought about it over and over again, but the more he gave it a thought, the more he realized that he was starting to feel something he has never felt: fear.<br /><br />He had to decide what to do. Ever second was harder than the previous one. He heard someone say to Clarissa: "Hey kiddo, don't you know who he is?", and Do you know who this man is? She said, without taking her eyes off of the man: "I know exactly what I'm doing, Ralph. Hell I know".<br /><br />Ray could not stand that last and started to move as fast as his body let him do it, but, without foreseeing it, Clarissa disappeared from his eyes and, in less than a half second, she was behind him with a knife on his neck. Carefuly she reached his right ear with the mouth and whispered: "I don't want to kill you, so don't make me. I just want you to let us all be. So get lost. I don't wanna see you again. And I don't wanna have to say it again."<br /><br />Since that day on 2523, no one heard of Ray ever again. Never.<br /><br />I know it all 'cause I was there. I'm Ralph.
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dimitrimdlv
Disculpa, es que se desorganizó todo cuando di click en editar respuesta, ya que tuve que corregir una palabra. donde quedó
va punto aparte. eso es todo.
dimitrimdlv
Donde dice dared to look him in the eyes, se me olvido que se dice look at him. está al principio.
dimitrimdlv
donde dice I remember hers, lo cambias por I remember her
dimitrimdlv
donde dice he heard someone say to Clarissa, lo cambias por he heard someone saying to Clarissa
dimitrimdlv
donde dice he heard someone say to Clarissa, lo cambias por he heard someone saying to Clarissa
dimitrimdlv
could not stand that last one. O sea tienes que escribir one.
dimitrimdlv
disculpa tantas correcciones. lo que pasa es que hago esto desde un celular, no he cambiado el idioma del teclado y por eso el autocorrect me molesta tanto. Y como iba inventando la historia a medida que la escribia, cometí algunos errores que no vi antes de dar en responder. Mil disculpas.