Question

Chciałabym, żeby ktoś sprawdził poprawnośc tego oto listu:

TEMAT:

"Odpowiadasz na list anglojęzycznego kolegi, który przysłał ci zdjęcia ze wspólnej wycieczki do Oxfordi. Napisz list, w którym:

- podziękujesz za przysłane zdjęcia i przypomnisz wydarzenie związane z jednym z nich

- zwrócisz uwagę, że jednego zdjęcia brakuje i opiszesz je

- poprosisz o przysłanie tego zdjęcia, uzasadniając swoją prośbę

- obiecasz, że wkrótce wyślesz zdjęcia robione przez siebie i wyrazisz nadzieję, że jeszcze kiedyś wspólnie wybierzecie się na wycieczkę

List ma zawierać 120-150 słów"

LIST:

Dear Emila!

How are you? I hope you're well. Thanks for your letter.

I'm writing to thank you from the photos, which you send me. (te zdanie wydaje mi się dziwne, nie na miejscu, proszę o zasugerowanie poprawki) The pictures are wonderful! Do you remember when we met Mark? While I was taking us a photo I whaped a camera. It was horrible! I was afraid I broke a camera.

You didn't send me one photo. In this photo we're going to the disco "Candles". I'm wearing a green t-shirt and black trousers and you're wearning a blue blouse and jeans trousers. Do you remember this photo? Please send me it, because my sister wants to see this photo.

I promise I send you my photos next week. Our trip was exciting and I hope we will go together to the trip next holidays.

Well, that's all for now. I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

Regards.

Kasia.

Oprócz punktów, za sprawdzenie listu i ewentualne poprawki (nawet całe zdania/akapity, jeśli są złe) mogę odwdzięczyć się także testami, kontakt na gg:193053. Bardzo proszę o sprawdzenie tego listu do godziny 20.00, odwdzięczę się!

Answer 1

Dear Emila!

How are you? I hope you're well. Thanks for your letter.

I'm writing to thank you FOR the photos you send me. The pictures are really wonderful! Do you remember when we met Mark? While I was taking a photo of us I dropped a camera. It was horrible! I was afraid I broke it.

It seems you didn't send me one photo. In this photo we're going to the disco "Candles". I'm wearing a green t-shirt and black trousers and you're wearning a blue blouse and jeans. Do you remember this photo? Please send me it because my sister wants to see it very much.

I promise I WILL send you my photos next week. Our trip was extremly exciting and I hope we will go together to the trip during next holidays.

Well, that's all for now. I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

Best wishes (słowo 'regards' jest formalne)

Kasia.

Answer 2

Dear Emila,

how are you? I hope you're well. Thanks for your letter. I'm writing to you, bacause I want thanks you for sending me photos. These pictures are wonderful! Do you remember a moment while I was taking us the photo and I whaped your camera. It was horrible! I was afraid I broke it.

 

You didn't send me one photo. In this photo we're going to the disco "Candles". I'm wearing a green t-shirt and black trousers and you're wearning a blue blouse and jeans trousers. Do you remember this photo? Please send me it, because my sister wants to see this photo.

 

I promise I will send you my photos next week. Our trip was exciting and I hope we will go together to the trip next holidays. Well, that's all for now. I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

 

Regards,

XYZ

 

Na maturze list ma zawierać 3 akapity i musisz podpisać się XYZ.