Question

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In Poland waters and forests are principal areas of the ecological threat.
Most important from them it
- air pollution,
water pollution
- polluting the soil
The Vistula is the most serious source of pollution of waters, from deep inside is bringing the country to the Baltic:
- over the 90% of limited matter
-96% of nitrogen
-2 / 3 of phosphorus.

Consequences:
- death of water birds,
- loss of holiday areas
- decline of the health of the man
- decline of climatic conditions
- production of the contaminated food.

We can prevent it.
Let us throw no rubbish into rivers, seas and lakes. Let us not make a mess in forests.
Remember that chemicals of different kind, felling forests, the exhaust fumes cause dying out of many animals as well as are destroying our planet.

Answer 1

Polish waters and forests are the main areas of ecological hazard.
The most important of these is
- Air pollution,
- Water pollution
- Soil contamination
Wisła is the most serious source of pollution, the depth is bringing the country to the Baltic Sea:
- More than 90% of limited
-96% Nitrogen
-2 / 3 Phosphorus.

consequences:
- Death of waterfowl
- Loss of recreational areas,
- Decrease of human health
- Decrease in climatic conditions,
- Preparation of contaminated food.

We can prevent this from happening!
Do not throw garbage into rivers, seas and lakes. Do not make a mess in the woods.
Remember that different types of chemicals causing deforestation, extinction of exhaust species and destroy the planet!

 

 

Troszeczkę zmieniłem mam nadzieję że pomogłem :D