Błagam ,niech ktoś zobaczy ile tam błędów zrobiłam i czy te powtórzenia się liczą jakoś bardzo. I napiszcie ile bym mogła pkt dostać . Pisałam to na egzaminie trochę w stresie i teraz bym chciała się upewnić. Mniej więcej tak napisałam oryginalnie.
14.Twój kolega wrócił niedawno do Polski po kilku latach pobytu za granicą. W e-mailu do koleżanki z Anglii:
- Poinformuj w jakich okolicznościach spotkałeś(-aś) się z tym kolegą po jego powrocie do Polski.
-Opisz , jak wygląda teraz ten kolega
- Napisz , jaki problem miał kolega po powrocie do Polski.
Wstęp: Hi Mary ,
Guess what! My old friend has just returned to Poland after living abroad for a few years.
Moja praca:
I met him while I was walking in the park. I almost didn't recognised him. He is taller than he was. He dyed his hair black. He also changed his style. I have to say that he looks like different person. We were talking for a few minutes. He told me that he had lost his suitcase at the airport. It turned out that someone took the wrong one. Fortunetly the man who took it gave it back and said sorry. That is the end of the story. Take care! XYZ
OCENIANIE:
Treść : /4
Spójność i logika wypowiedzi : /2
Zakres środków językowych : /2
Poprawność środków językowych : /2
14.Twój kolega wrócił niedawno do Polski po kilku latach pobytu za granicą. W e-mailu do koleżanki z Anglii:
- Poinformuj w jakich okolicznościach spotkałeś(-aś) się z tym kolegą po jego powrocie do Polski.
-Opisz , jak wygląda teraz ten kolega
- Napisz , jaki problem miał kolega po powrocie do Polski.
Wstęp: Hi Mary ,
Guess what! My old friend has just returned to Poland after living abroad for a few years.
Moja praca:
I met him while I was walking in the park. I almost didn't recognised him. He is taller than he was. He dyed his hair black. He also changed his style. I have to say that he looks like different person. We were talking for a few minutes. He told me that he had lost his suitcase at the airport. It turned out that someone took the wrong one. Fortunetly the man who took it gave it back and said sorry. That is the end of the story. Take care! XYZ
OCENIANIE:
Treść : /4
Spójność i logika wypowiedzi : /2
Zakres środków językowych : /2
Poprawność środków językowych : /2
In our conversation, he shared some interesting stories about his experiences in the country he was living in. He talked about the different culture, traditions, and the challenges he faced while adjusting to a new environment. It was fascinating to hear about his adventures and the friends he made along the way.
We also discussed his plans now that he's back in Poland. He mentioned that he was considering starting a new job and exploring some entrepreneurial opportunities. It's great to see him motivated and enthusiastic about his future prospects.
Overall, it was a delightful surprise to bump into my old friend and learn about his journey. It reminded me of the importance of staying connected with people and how experiences abroad can shape and change a person. I'm looking forward to catching up with him further and creating new memories together.
Take care, Mary!