Question

1.My favourite photo is of me playing volleyball on the beach.
2.My father took this photo in the summer of 2008.He took this
photo at the seaside in Poland.
3.When my father took this photo I and my brother were playing
volleyball. I was better. I had more points so I won. When we
were playing volleyball my sister was sleeping on the beach.
4.I, my brother and my sister are in the photo. My brother is
Paul. He’s 20.He likes playing volleyball with me. My sister
is Jola. She’s 22.She likes sleeping. I’m Peter. I’m 16.
I like being in the photo when I play volleyball.
5.I keep this photo on the wall in my room. I like seeing
this photo because I mind my successful holiday.

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Answer 1

1.My favourite photo is me playing volleyball on the beach.
2.My father took this photo in the summer of 2008. He took it at the seaside in Poland.
3.When he did it, I was playing volleyball with my brother. I was better. I got more points so I won. When we were playing my sister was sleeping on the beach.
4.My brother and my sister are with me on the photo. My brother's name is
Paul. He’s 20.He likes playing volleyball with me. My sister's name is Jola. She’s 22.She likes sleeping. I’m Peter. I’m 16.
I like to watch myself on the picture while I am playing voyellbal.
5. I keep this photo on the wall in my room. I like watching
this photo because It reminds me my successful holiday.