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Hi, Jessica !
In 17th of October in my school was festival.
There was a lot of games, from shoot to basket when running.
When We want get some a gift,
We must to help somebody with work.
When my team won in shooting to basket, I was very happy.
But In class games we are lose with II H by one point I was sad.
I think it's great festival of my school, and next time We won with this lucky class. Daje tyle punktów ile mam, za najlepszą odp. !
In 17th of October in my school was festival.
ON 17th of October in my school was festival.
In this festival organization was great ! - The festival organization was great!
When We want get some a gift,
We must to help somebody with work.- when we wanted to get a gift , we had to help somebody with work.
I think it's great festival of my school,- Ithink it's one of the best festival organised in my school.