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Dear John
How are you? I hope you’re OK. Are you okay in school?I’m writing to inform you about I have a girlfriend.
Her name is Patrycja. We met at the concert Zakopower three weeks ago. One Friday night I decided to buy ticket and go to the concert. When the band started play, suddenly next to me to stood up a beautiful blonde. I was very excited and delighted that girl. I was looking at her discreetly. I don’t know how to start a conversation. So I decided ask her What is her name and Do her like this band. The girlsmiledandrespondedto my questions. When the film finished we shared our phone number.
After school we walk together to the park We talk about various topic and laughing of them. Last Sunday we were at the Zoo.
I’ll be really happy if you could come. Say hello to your girlfriend for me.
Greetings
XYZ
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Dear John
How are you? I hope you’re OK. Are you okay in school? I’m writing to inform you about I have a girlfriend.
Her name is Patrycja. We met at the concert of band "Zakopower" three weeks ago. One Friday night I decided to buy ticket and go to the concert. When the band started play, suddenly next to me to stood up a beautiful blonde. I was very excited and delighted that girl. I was looking at her discreetly. I didn't know how to start a conversation. So I decided ask her What is her name and Does she like this band. The girl smiled and responded to my questions. When the conversation has been finished we shared our phone number.
After school we walk together to the park. We talk about various topics and laughed of them. Last Sunday we were at the Zoo.
I’ll be really happy if you could come. Say hello to your girlfriend for me.
Greetings
XYZ
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