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Witajcie ;) Proszę o sprawdzenie krótkiego wypracowania na temat ochrony środowiska ;)Hi. Today, I’m going to tell you something about our planet and issues that concern them. We and the Earth are in danger. Factories produce masses of smoke every day. If we don't do something it will be worse and worse. Scientists have suggested that if we reduce a smoke, we would live up to 2 years longer.Of course World would be more healthy. We can save a lot of money for medicine. Polish National Health Service can save up to 31,5 billion PLN.Let’s go to the next issue.We’re losing a lot of water! In 2010, 884 milion people were out of water. That’s terrible. In 2025, at least 1,8 bilion people won’t have clean water.We should reduce water consumption, for example we can take a shower instead of a bath. The ozone hole is growing. Temperature is higher and glaciers are melting.We must do something before it is too late. Let us take this as a call to action.Let’s protect the environment.

Answer 1

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Answer 2

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