Question

This is Fiona. She's my Girlfriend. She's 14 years old. She's thin person. She's of medium height. She has long blonde hair.
She wears green T-shirt, white shoes and blue trousers..
She like music , TV , goin to the cinema.
She is usually a happy but sometimes is angry.
She's very beautiful girl.

czy mógłby ktoś poprawić błędy ? Jeśli się jakieś tutaj znajdują :) ?

Answer 1

girlfriend z małej litery

she likes music

going to the cinema

she is usually happy (bez "a" przed happy)

she's a very beautiful girl

 

to wszystko, mam nadzieję że pomogłam :)

Answer 2

This is Fiona. She's my girlfriend. She's 14 years old. She's thin and medium height. She has got long blonde hair.
She wears green T-shirt, white shoes and blue trousers.
She likes music, TV and going to the cinema.
She is usually happy, but sometimes is angry.
She's a very beautiful girl.

Tak byłoby najlepiej i najpoprawniej imo.