Question

sprawdzi mi ktoś czy dobrze napisałam e-mail po angielsku ?

jezeli sa błędy to poprawcie :))

Dear , ******

I'm writing to you because I must tell you about my new hobby, I mean volleyball.

Volleyball is very fantastic sport. I just love it ! I started play long time ago, in primary school but I interested of volleyball 6 months ago.

I hope so, you will write to me about your hobby.

KISSES

****

Answer 1

Wszystko dobrze napisałaś !. ;D 
Nie widze błędów . :D 

 

 

 

 

Answer 2

I'm writing to you, because I must tell you about my new hobby - volleyball.

         It'sa very fantastic sport. I just love it ! I started  to play long time ago, in primary school, but I'im interested init since 6 months ago.

         I hope that you will write to me about your hobby too.

 

Myślę, że tak powinno być, ale moge się mylić ;)