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Are you looking for a pet ? If you are, buy cat. I think cats are very good pets.
Firstly, cats are very friendly. They sit next to you and let you stroke them.
Secondly, these pets can be amusing .They do funny things.
What's more cats independent . They can look after themselves.

On the other hand,some people might say that cats are very lazy . they can be mean.
If they don't like you they will scratch you.
furthermore they cause extra housework because they leave hairs everywhere.
In addition they can destroy furniture because they sharpen their claws about them.
In conclusion, Although cats are very lazy , they are certainly very friendly and amusing.

Answer 1

Are you looking for a pet ? If you are, buy a cat. I think cats are very good pets.   
    Firstly, cats are very friendly. They sit next to you and let you stroke them.
    Secondly, these pets can be amusing .They do funny things.
    What's more, cats are independent . They can look after themselves.
 
  On the other hand,some people might say that cats are very lazy . They can also be  mean.
If they don't like you, they will scratch you.
Furthermore, they cause extra housework, because they leave their hair0 everywhere.
In addition, they can destroy furniture, because they sharpen their claws on it.
   In conclusion, although cats are very lazy , they are certainly very friendly and amusing.

 

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