Sprawdzcie, czy sa jakieś błędy (gramatyka, przedimki, słownictwo itd)... Może macie jeszcze jakieś uwagi co to tego wypraowania? Dajcie pomysły!!
Many people think life in the town is wonderful. But is really it? Isn't village better than city? Firstly, there is everything not far - shops, cinemas, swimming pools in the town. Also we have got many places to meet with our friends. It is great!
On the other hand there is too much pollutions, heavy traffic and constans noice in the city. Town can be dangerous becoufe of thieves and burglaries. To sum up there are strong arguments both for and against town. Although better place to live is a village. There is fresh air, peaceful and quiet forests. Countryside is just beautiful
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Na początku powinno być "Many people think THAT life..." Potem "But IF it really is? ... To zdanie z "everything not far" zapisałabym Firstly, everything is not far. "We have got..." Skreśliłabym GOT - jest zbędne ;P Czyli : We have many places to meet with our friends. W nastepnym zdaniu: nie ma POLLUTIONS, ponieważ to jest nie policzalne, więc będzie poprostu POLLUTION. Heavy trafficS, constanT noiSe ( hałas się pisze przez "s") W następnym zdaniu TownS, i because. Reszta jest OK :)