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QUIEN ME AYUDA EN CAMBIAR ESTE TEXTO EN INGLES A PRESENTE PERFECTO

hi isabella today i'm be in disney land here is magic i love it this place remember my infancy and i'm going to tell you all about to my day. ok first i get out from the hotel and aks a uber and go from the park when i arrive i mout to many attractions my first atrraction be about ariel and befor i will go to a march about all the movies of disney and before i mount in many attractions so exteme and i will go from my room in the hotel disney resorts and my room is about rapunzel and it's so beatiful and before i sleep and this be my day
goodbye

Answer 1

Hi isabella today i have been in disneyland, here is megic, i have love it. this place remember my CHILDHOOD and i'm going to tell you about my day. today i have out from the hotel and asked for an uber, when i have arrived. i have gone to many attractions. my first attraction has been about ariel, and then i have gone to a PARADE (desfile, march no es una palabra correcta) of all disney's movies, then i have gone to many extreme attractions.i have gon to my room in the resort and my room was about rapunzel, its beautiful.
goodbye

before es antes, para decir despues usa "then" o "after that"