Question

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On one sunny day Henry and Sammy with his dog Scotty were camping next to the old castle. Henry was preparing the meal, when Sammy with his dog was going to the castle. He said "I'll come back in 10 minutes". After 10 minutes Henry was angry, because Sammy was not there. Henry decided to look for Sammy. He was going to the castle. When he arrived, heard he Scottys balk from the window. He climbed on the window and sow a well and Sammy behind it. He look down into the well and sow Cammy into the water. It was to deep to take him up. Henry was thinking... It's it! He had a belt. He tied his beld and gave it to Sammy. Scotty was barking but Henry could take up Sammy outside the well. They were going to theri camping side. They were eating hot meal and Scotty Pedeegree! The day was still sunny!

Answer 1

On one sunny day Henry and Sammy with his dog Scotty were camping next to the old castle. Henry was preparing the meal, when Sammy with his dog was going to the castle. He said "I'll be back in 10 minutes". After 10 minutes Henry was angry, because Sammy wasn't back on time. Henry decided to look for Sammy. He was going to the castle. When he arrived, heard he Scotty's balk from the window. He climbed on the window and saw a well and Sammy behind it. He was looking down into the well and saw Cammy into the water. It was too deep to take him up. Henry was thinking... It's it! He had a belt. He tied his beld and gave it to Sammy. Scotty was barking but Henry could take up Sammy outside the well. They were going to their camping side. They were eating hot meal and Scotty Pedeegree! The day was sunny to the end of day!

 

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